Bird of Passage.

Yateer

Sab'a Sita Ethnain
Asalam 'Alaykuum,

This is my latest poem, just a little note, a bird of passage is a bird that is continuously moving, in other words it is free. Please leave feed back and enjoy:

Bird of Passage

By MuslimBrother92

Birds of passage fly over me,
Like a soothing wind over a sea.
My strength is growing as I remember,
Remember the day I defeated the blinder.

The blinder was a raven, pecking at my heart,
Causing it to rot and fall apart.
But days have changed as I am wiser,
Resisting the words of this dreadful blinder.

This raven was once a beautiful dove,
Until one day it lost its love.
It lost its love for this beautiful religion,
Making people fall for a dreadful illusion.

The dreadful illusion was this corrupted world,
Which the raven disguised as a beautiful pearl.
It fooled mankind including me,
Because it was the blinder and we couldn’t see.

We couldn’t see the truth behind this dreadful illusion,
Not knowing it’s really a source of pollution.
It polluted our hearts and especially our souls,
Leaving in them, un-patchable holes.

It then recruited more ravens for its sinister mission,
To keep people away from the beautiful religion.
So these ravens flew from person to person,
Pecking at their hearts until they blacken.

Slowly the birds of passage were caged,
And the blinder’s battle was finally raged.
It continues to rage to this very day,
As its blackness blinds and its plans are set allay.

It commanded its minions from its cursed nest,
To roam the sky’s and to infest.
Infest the hearts of weak mankind,
As slowly but surely, the birds of passage declined.

They fell from the sky and landed in cages,
As they cried sweet tears and fell into comas.
Most of them are waiting to be set-free,
But the people don’t realise that they have the key.

The key is a book that is complete and pure,
That if someone is sick it is their cure.
It was brought down for mankind to follow,
So they do not end up in a lengthy sorrow.

So when the people decide to follow this book,
The birds of passage can begin to unhook.
Unhook the hinges on their cages door,
And fly away and spread what they adore.

They adore the religion that is for the humble,
That leads a person to become so peaceful.
They will spread this religion all over this world,
And really make it into a beautiful pearl.

I was once fooled by this deceiving raven,
That pecked at my heart and caused it to blacken.
But now I’m glad to say I’m spreading the message,
The message of truth, so I am a bird of passage.
 

aroojimran

Junior Member
SOOTHING POEM

Assalamualykum brother

First of all accept my congrats for drafting such a beautiful and compact poem..:ma:

The art of construction of ideas is marvellous as is your deep contemplation....keep going?

wassalam

All the very Best!
Asalam 'Alaykuum,

This is my latest poem, just a little note, a bird of passage is a bird that is continuously moving, in other words it is free. Please leave feed back and enjoy:

Bird of Passage

By MuslimBrother92

Birds of passage fly over me,
Like a soothing wind over a sea.
My strength is growing as I remember,
Remember the day I defeated the blinder.

The blinder was a raven, pecking at my heart,
Causing it to rot and fall apart.
But days have changed as I am wiser,
Resisting the words of this dreadful blinder.

This raven was once a beautiful dove,
Until one day it lost its love.
It lost its love for this beautiful religion,
Making people fall for a dreadful illusion.

The dreadful illusion was this corrupted world,
Which the raven disguised as a beautiful pearl.
It fooled mankind including me,
Because it was the blinder and we couldn’t see.

We couldn’t see the truth behind this dreadful illusion,
Not knowing it’s really a source of pollution.
It polluted our hearts and especially our souls,
Leaving in them, un-patchable holes.

It then recruited more ravens for its sinister mission,
To keep people away from the beautiful religion.
So these ravens flew from person to person,
Pecking at their hearts until they blacken.

Slowly the birds of passage were caged,
And the blinder’s battle was finally raged.
It continues to rage to this very day,
As its blackness blinds and its plans are set allay.

It commanded its minions from its cursed nest,
To roam the sky’s and to infest.
Infest the hearts of weak mankind,
As slowly but surely, the birds of passage declined.

They fell from the sky and landed in cages,
As they cried sweet tears and fell into comas.
Most of them are waiting to be set-free,
But the people don’t realise that they have the key.

The key is a book that is complete and pure,
That if someone is sick it is their cure.
It was brought down for mankind to follow,
So they do not end up in a lengthy sorrow.

So when the people decide to follow this book,
The birds of passage can begin to unhook.
Unhook the hinges on their cages door,
And fly away and spread what they adore.

They adore the religion that is for the humble,
That leads a person to become so peaceful.
They will spread this religion all over this world,
And really make it into a beautiful pearl.

I was once fooled by this deceiving raven,
That pecked at my heart and caused it to blacken.
But now I’m glad to say I’m spreading the message,
The message of truth, so I am a bird of passage.
 

Yateer

Sab'a Sita Ethnain
Assalamualykum brother

First of all accept my congrats for drafting such a beautiful and compact poem..:ma:

The art of construction of ideas is marvellous as is your deep contemplation....keep going?

wassalam

All the very Best!

Asalam 'Alaykuum,

Jazak Allahu Kheir for your constructive critiquing, it is much appreciated. May Allah reward you inshallah.

Wasalam 'Alaykuum.
 

ayesha_r

Muslimah
:salam2:
wow bro that was such a beautiful poem
keep up the good work
post more:D..I really like to read them
take care
:wasalam:
 

aroojimran

Junior Member
Asalam 'Alaykuum,

Jazak Allahu Kheir for your constructive critiquing, it is much appreciated. May Allah reward you inshallah.

Wasalam 'Alaykuum.

Salaam alykum Dear

All good things are to be appreciated..and as far as your poem goes,it deserves even more..

I also used to write poems but gave up somewhere in between....Might start again...[Anyways keep sharing your poems always..

Waalykum Assalam/B]
 

Yateer

Sab'a Sita Ethnain
Jazak Allahu Kheir for the feedback, it is sincerely appreciated, may Allah reward you inshallah. Just to let you guys know, I've officially made up my own poetic quote, to my knowledge I have never seen or heard anyone say or write this as Allah is my witness. So anyway here it is:

"Writing isn't only putting pen to paper... It is the process of forming words that put together meaning."

Wasalam 'Alaykuum.
 

IbnAhmad

Junior Member
:salam2:

MashaAllah!

Jazakallahu Khair for sharing such a wonderful piece of poetry!
Keep posting Brother!

:wasalam:
 

poetic

mrs aisha b
Salaam Alaikum

Jazak Allah for shareing this poem with us all.. it was truly beautiful and meangiful nad good job on video
 

Yateer

Sab'a Sita Ethnain
Asalam 'Alaykuum,

Jazak Allahu Kheir for your comments, it is appreciated. May Allah reward you all inshallah.

Wasalam 'Alaykuum.
 

slave_of_Allah

Junior Member
Masha'Allah, your words read so beautifully, and there was so much meaning in them. Jazka'Allah khair for sharing what was in your heart, keep on sharing your beautiful words with us. Masha'Allah you have a gift, one that I pray will not wear away.

I pray Allah blesses you with jannah tul firdos, and rewards you for all your efforts in trying to spread the truth. Aameen.
 

IHearIslam

make dua 4 ma finals
Assalamu Alaikum my dear brother:D:D:D

SubhanaAllah!!! your poem was amaazing...I personally like all your poems, there is something about them, that the heart wishes to read!!! tabarakaAllah....and jazakaAllah khairan for sharing!!!
keep 'em coming brotha!!
Allah bw with you allwayss:D
 

nyhenna

New Member
:salam2:

IT'S PERFECT, SUBHAANALLAH.
So incredibly thought provoking, I love it so much, love tracing the path the narrator took.
Sounds like the path my life took.
May Allah always guide us, ameen.
 

Yateer

Sab'a Sita Ethnain
Asalam 'Alaykuum,

Jazak Allahu Kheir for your comments everybody, you have made me happy! May Allah grant you all a place in Ferdose Al-A'hla. Ameen.

Wasalam 'Alaykuum.
 

Asja

Pearl of Islaam
Assalamu Allaicum dear brother

Mashallah,it is really amazing beautiful!!!!!!! You have really great talent and gift from Allah for writeing.

I hope Inshallah you will share more poems of you brother.:hijabi:

Jazzak Allah khair and may Allah bless you:tti_sister:

:wasalam:
 
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