Heart of Darkness

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    Heart of Darkness

    By MuslimBrother92



    When I’m down I feel depressed.
    I feel as if I’m being oppressed.
    I try hard to come out of the dark.
    And that is when I look at my heart.


    My heart is attached to something small,
    And this is what has made me fall.
    I try to get up but I cannot,
    I am stuck on this dark spot.


    I work hard for this little thing,
    And I have made it my everything.
    I try to look past the consuming darkness,
    But I cannot see through its pure blackness.


    All this is from this little thing,
    And now I could feel the painful sting.
    Although I have this life I shall miss out,
    I’ll miss out on Jannah while I burnout.


    I say I’m working for this religion,
    But that is nothing but a sad illusion.
    The truth is I’m working for myself,
    To buy and buy, to please oneself.


    So now I should wake up to true reality,
    And really commit to my obliged duty.
    Because if I don’t I will be punished,
    And in the end I would have perished.


    The little thing that caused all this to spring,
    Was nothing but the dunya,
    Wrapped up like a ring.


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    :ma: very nice poetry
    thank u for sharing it
    May ALLAH bless you.Ameen
    walikum salam
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    Jazak Allahu Kheir to anyone who leaves feedback and really enjoys my literature.

    Wasalam Alaykuum.
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    Awesome Brother ....Thanks fr post it ...Keep posting .....:SMILY206:

    :wasalam:
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    Jazak Allahu Kheir,

    And don't worry, I've got more, inshallah I'll post the ones I like most later inshallah.

    Wasalam Alaykuum.
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    Oh wow...this really made me look at my life. Thanks for the reminder and keep writing and posting. mA awesome job!!
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    Jazak Allahu Kheir, I'm glad to see it has impact on people. And inshallah I will keep writing....

    Wasalam Alaykuum.
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    MashaAllah, tabarakaAllah!! so POWERFUL words! it carries a true leson in it:) may Allah bless you for sharing:Dameen

    may we all be those who do good for Allah's sake.ameen
    JazakaAllah khairan for sharing it with us:)
    inshaAllah, I am looking forward to your other poems:D:D:D
    Allah hafiz now and always:D
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    mashaAllah Akhii! a very powerful piece of poetry :)
    keep posting inshaAllah!

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    :ma:

    very nice poetry.
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    Jazak Allahu Kheir everybody! Inshallah I'll post up more poems soon inshallah... I might even post up my first 4 chapters of my book...

    Wasalam Alaykuum.

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