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uniqueskates

Rabbe Zidni Illma
:bismillah1:
:salam:

Amidst the music of running engines.
Blaring horns and human screams.
I toss and turn on my bus seat.
To catch a sleep, which is so sweet.

My mind pumps, my thoughts wander.
They hit a target, over which I ponder.
It instills a fear in my heart.
And nearly rips my body apart.

Have you ever imagined about death?
Do you fear that this could be your last breath?
Are you happy with what you have become?
Or do you feel like me, a piece of scum?

Does your throat burn with guilt when you lie?
Ever regretted the words, when your anger touched the sky?
Did you ever try to be a little more kind?
Or judged between two without being blind?

Does your hand extend to help the needy?
Do you feel sad that you are more greedy?
Ever forgave others for the scars they left?
Or were you patient when bereft?

Ever wept incessantly for the sins done?
Desires & lusts, did you try to shun?
Do you miss the human spirit in you?
Or lament over, when your beloved bids a final adieu?

It is a short life of 60 years, a fleeting time.
I swear if you change a bit, it would be no crime.
Do it before Mr. Death knocks on your gate.
Else you would regret living a life, and it will be too late.

P.S - Comments and criticism are welcomed. :)
Peace.
 

Nureyni Amir

Junior Member
Asalamu Alaikum Warahmatullahi Wabarakatuh, awakening call subhannallah, Jazakallahu kheyran katheeran for sharing may Allah bestow upon us good in this world and the hereafter.
 

ishislam

i am never alone.allah is always with me
:wasalam: warahmatullahi wabarakatuh... Jazakallah khairan for the reminder :)
 

afrarzk

احبك ىارب
Wa alaikum as salam wa rahmathullah wa barakath

Brother uniqueskates, is that poem written by you?

Masha Allah well written, such a lovely reminder.

Oh Turner of the Hearts keep our Hearts firm on Your Religion

O Allah! Grant us life as long as life is good for us, and cause us to die when death is better for us."
Ameen ya samee ud dua
 

uniqueskates

Rabbe Zidni Illma
Asalamu Alaikum Warahmatullahi Wabarakatuh, awakening call subhannallah, Jazakallahu kheyran katheeran for sharing may Allah bestow upon us good in this world and the hereafter.

Walaikumassalaam wa re wa barakatuhu.
Wa iyyaki sister. Happy you liked it. :)

:wasalam: warahmatullahi wabarakatuh... Jazakallah khairan for the reminder :)
Wa iyyaki sister. :)

Wa alaikum as salam wa rahmathullah wa barakath

Brother uniqueskates, is that poem written by you?

Masha Allah well written, such a lovely reminder.

Oh Turner of the Hearts keep our Hearts firm on Your Religion

O Allah! Grant us life as long as life is good for us, and cause us to die when death is better for us."
Ameen ya samee ud dua

Yes. Finally I wrote a useful poem [usually I am stuck with romantic poems :oops: ]. Phew! Alhamdulilah :)
Ameen to your dua'a sister.

mashallah brother,this poem touched me deeply.thank you for sharing

JazakAllah Khair for reading it patiently sister. :)

Peace
 

hayat84

I'm not what you believe
I too like romantic poems,I'm so romantic that I sometimes cry over what I've written:rolleyes:
 
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