Which one is better?

[MuslimShadow]

Assalamu alaikum warahmatullahi wabarakatuhu

I made these banners by myself.Just tell me which one is better.

You opinion will be appreciated.

Glittering one or the black one.

 

[Itqan Ullah]

Waliekumasslam warahmatullahi wabarakatu,
They both look good.

If your looking for critique on artwork then I'll say The first one isn't suited to theme. The main emphasis of the image is "Tranquility". So, the selection of background should also be as such, so it reflects meaning. Something like light background and cursive smooth text. The first image give a blood kinda feel due to complete red flora pattern at the end accompanied by a black background which is more inclination towards sorrow than tranquility.

Second one is more suited to theme. Just a small thing you can improve is when you use light background its better to use fading borders for objects than solid strokes, So for flora pattern it might look good if you use an outer glow with light pink color than solid red stroke. Also the snowflakes at the back of the leaves playing look a bit strange, you can give it a solid color and then use snowflakes (scaled down quite a bit) an the edges at some places to give a glint effect, you can also also make alpha opacity fade in and out in animation to give a twinkling effect.
Just my personal opinion anyway, Barakallah Feeki for your efforts.

 

[kashif_nazeer]

wa 'alaikumasalam warahmatullahi ta'ala wabarakatuhu,
Sister,I think the second one is better masha'Allah.First one looks a wee bit dark and red.

In the second one sister use a different font insha'Allah,this font seems a bit like gothic font.
BarakAllahu feeki.

 

[helpinghumanity]

Wa-alaikumus salam wa rahmatullah

Both of them are really nice. I think, I should print it out on a huge piece of paper and glue it on my room's wall.

Which one is better? It is like asking a question "who do you like? Mother or father"

 

[PeacefulHumanity]

Salam,

They both look nice, but I hope you'll respect me for my honesty: the first association I made when I saw the upper one was blood. Which is probably the opposite of what we're going for here.

My pick is the second one. Peace to all and have a nice day.

 

[MuslimShadow]

Waliekumasslam warahmatullahi wabarakatu,
They both look good.

If your looking for critique on artwork then I'll say The first one isn't suited to theme. The main emphasis of the image is "Tranquility". So, the selection of background should also be as such, so it reflects meaning. Something like light background and cursive smooth text. The first image give a blood kinda feel due to complete red flora pattern at the end accompanied by a black background which is more inclination towards sorrow than tranquility.

Second one is more suited to theme. Just a small thing you can improve is when you use light background its better to use fading borders for objects than solid strokes, So for flora pattern it might look good if you use an outer glow with light pink color than solid red stroke. Also the snowflakes at the back of the leaves playing look a bit strange, you can give it a solid color and then use snowflakes (scaled down quite a bit) an the edges at some places to give a glint effect, you can also also make alpha opacity fade in and out in animation to give a twinkling effect.
Just my personal opinion anyway, Barakallah Feeki for your efforts.

Assalamo alaikum

Jazakallah khairan for your honest response.I knew something was terribly wrong with the first one.I think you can make beautiful banners.

wa 'alaikumasalam warahmatullahi ta'ala wabarakatuhu,
Sister,I think the second one is better masha'Allah.First one looks a wee bit dark and red.

In the second one sister use a different font insha'Allah,this font seems a bit like gothic font.
BarakAllahu feeki.

Jazakallah khairan.Yes, now i can make the second one my own signature.Thanks for liking it.

Wa-alaikumus salam wa rahmatullah

Both of them are really nice. I think, I should print it out on a huge piece of paper and glue it on my room's wall.

Which one is better? It is like asking a question "who do you like? Mother or father"

Assalamo alaikum warahmatullah

That's so nice of you, brother.It's a pleasure to read your response.

Salam,

They both look nice, but I hope you'll respect me for my honesty: the first association I made when I saw the upper one was blood. Which is probably the opposite of what we're going for here.

My pick is the second one. Peace to all and have a nice day.

Wa'ssalam.

lol.....this made me smile.Now it's clear that the second one is better.

 

[IHearIslam]

Assalaamu alaykum,

I really LOVE the second one..... the first one just looks depressing try different colors and show us again. Maybe light blue or something. Not saying the colors of the second are bad, but just play with the colors and see which one makes you feel tranquil. You're talented mA!

 

[kalamazoo]

asalaam aleykum,

the blank one

sister, (if i may) how about being in Arabic at the top followed by as is in English.
the leaves if you can make them as heart type (according the verse)color a little pale to the ones.

thank you.