OsMaN_93
Here to help
:salam2:
i wrote this poem ,so i hope u like it
if yuu have any suggetions of adding/canceling lines plz tell me :lol:
with the word "he" "him".. i refer to winter
so i used personification metaphors , similes
Winter
Seasons of cold and biting wind
The sun now waek and hidden by his clouds
Close bosom friend of Jack Frost
Conspiring with him to bring the stormy nights
He stocks the shops with food and supplies
And undresses the trees from their green leaves
Blocking the roads with his white arms
Blowing mist all around
Hiding animals asleep under the snow
Until they think the warm day will never return
...Has anyone ever seen him icy and bright
In the middle of rivers and lakes shimmering with light
He makes people huddle together in their cozy homes
Listening to the wind whistle and moan
He loads and bends the pine trees with snow
The light of the moon on holly does glow
... Where have all the rhythms gone??
Searching in vain the sun wan
As thunder is called, to tear the silence
Covering the land dark and dense
But the swallows of summer are not around
Winter has strengthened his icy hold
On town and country gripped with cold
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© By
[c=37]- ·@...«™Osman 2к7™»...[/c=39] ©
plz leave me a comment of what you think of my poem
jazakom Allah ,and for trading mark ,ignore it, you can copy my poem if you like...:lol: im not gona sue my brovs/sis's hehehe
and if you think its crap , plz be honest and tell me!!!
i wrote this poem ,so i hope u like it
if yuu have any suggetions of adding/canceling lines plz tell me :lol:
with the word "he" "him".. i refer to winter
so i used personification
metaphors , similes Winter
Seasons of cold and biting wind
The sun now waek and hidden by his clouds
Close bosom friend of Jack Frost
Conspiring with him to bring the stormy nights
He stocks the shops with food and supplies
And undresses the trees from their green leaves
Blocking the roads with his white arms
Blowing mist all around
Hiding animals asleep under the snow
Until they think the warm day will never return
...Has anyone ever seen him icy and bright
In the middle of rivers and lakes shimmering with light
He makes people huddle together in their cozy homes
Listening to the wind whistle and moan
He loads and bends the pine trees with snow
The light of the moon on holly does glow
... Where have all the rhythms gone??
Searching in vain the sun wan
As thunder is called, to tear the silence
Covering the land dark and dense
But the swallows of summer are not around
Winter has strengthened his icy hold
On town and country gripped with cold
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
© By
[c=37]- ·@...«™Osman 2к7™»...[/c=39] ©
plz leave me a comment of what you think of my poem
jazakom Allah ,and for trading mark ,ignore it, you can copy my poem if you like...:lol: im not gona sue my brovs/sis's
heheheand if you think its crap , plz be honest and tell me!!!
dont get it, wat yr saying???????? 
u make me laf bro..
