Revolutionary poem

[MutlekM]

:salam2:
BismaAllaah Alrahman Alraheem


My words are your worst enemy
If you think you can stop my spittin streak
You can call it rap but I say its poetry
The ones you’re listenin to are crap poems with a beat
Your models are commitin adultery
While I’m tryin to figure out why people hated me
They don’t care bout you cause wealth is all they perceive
They only fear our unity
So our differences is all we receive
Now I’m starting a revolutionary
Yes I’m coming as a stranger and as a stranger I will leave
I want to help my human family
Till the last breath I breathe
So help if you have the guts and dignity
I don’t want to be on the pages of history
Just a brother of humanity
And our brotherhood is what we will retrieve
So in our creator shall we believe
And we will stop every committed tragedy
Peace

 

[MutlekM]

Sorry I'm not very good at concluding my poems so if anyone has any advice for me then that will be awesome.
Peace

 

[ahmed_indian]

mashallah bro for your intentions and thinking.

PS: i too am bad in poems.

 

[MutlekM]

mashallah bro for your intentions and thinking.

PS: i too am bad in poems.

Thx bro, and practice builds perfection is the way I see it

 

[aamna faatima]

asalmualaykum
this was great MA SHAA ALLAH
jazak Allahu khairan..!!!
=]

 

[MutlekM]

asalmualaykum
this was great MA SHAA ALLAH
jazak Allahu khairan..!!!
=]

Shukran ukhti. I appreciate ur support
Peace