an open letter to my future. Fist edition

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    .Dia future wife,it is my sincere
    hope this letter finds U well..as i write
    this short note,dia wife,i try 2 explore
    my imagination 4 words tht adequately
    expres da thoughts tht dwell da deepest part of my heart n yet rise
    clouds-high 2 encompass my feelings 4
    U..dia wife,i accord the future tht lies
    ahead unimaginable care n concern 4 a
    life wth u is nothin bt a treasurea..i pray
    tht The Most Compasionate bleses us wth children tht r da comfort of our
    eyes.children wonderful beautiful n
    kind heartd..i can imagine my daughter
    Aishah learnin 2 take da 1st steps..i can
    c her clutch my hand as i take her 2 da
    Madarasah in da early sunrise..i imagine alot more..i cn picture my son,the
    beloved Muhaisani reciting the beautiful
    ayahs of the Quran.i cn c tears drop 2
    his lap as he reads the Quran in awe of
    its beauty.i can c my daughter
    Firdausah seated next 2 U as u both pray..i cn c her ask Allah 4 4gvnes in
    our behalf..tht aside,dia wife, may i nw
    unlock 4 u wonderful treasures tht i
    offer none but 2 U..treasures revered in
    awe n admiration..treasures kept secret
    n adorned in appreciation..pearls enveloped in seductive affection n
    beautified in a non-chalant grace..2 b
    Cntd.
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    I'm sorry, its not in an orderly manner as i was using a mobile phone.
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    Assalamu allaicum wa rahmatullah wa barakatuhu

    MashAllah dear brother. It is very nice written. But I think it would be better if you could correct some mistakes in your text, so that it may be more understandable for us, Inshallah.

    Assalamu allaicum
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    :ma: As far as I understand it, it's beautiful.. :hijabi:
    May ALLAH bless you.
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    aslam o aliakum

    InshAllah u shud try to write it so full words and proper english is used

    to be honest its a lil weird cause well these words should be said to your spouse, not on the forum when u said letter i thought u meant something different.
    But it could be just me i felt a lil shy reading it, a lil awkward cause well things like this i would be able to say just it to one person in our privacy not on the forum

    Allah knws best
    i dont want to put u down or hurt ur feeling its very deeply written and have alot of emotion and love
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    jazakumulahu kheyran sister Asja and Zeynat. .inshaALLAH. I will be using a computer when posting other threads. I was having a bit difficulty when I writting it.

    For brother, slaveofALLAH, the spouse is an imaginary one that's why i wrote . . . .to my future wife. Well, a married man may be. Anyway, jazakallahu for your opinion

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