Friendship

[umama]

i just made up this song with my friends but....


Growing pains
broken chains
a sad melody

falling tears
listening ears
a frien just for me

reaching out
sharing doubt
when life gets me down

loving light
holding tight
calm serenity

 

[yameenahmed]

good i think it should be a bit longer

 

[hasinah]

yeah carry it on and it will be a really good poem inshaAllah!

 

[AlQurtubi]

Its very nice sister umama. Rework on it and it might compete with any thing better