My first poem : Prayer

[Agus Rahadian]

O Allah...!
greatness is Your greatness
glory is Your glory
You light above the light
Give Your light to our hearts

O Allah ...!
if You deign
Give it to me, what do you give to Your servants that righteous
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(Please correct any wrong word.
My first English-language poetry)

 

[Hassan]

(Please correct any wrong word.
My first English-language poetry)

Ma shaa Allah. I didn't see this one until now
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O Allah...!
greatness is Your greatness
glory is Your glory
You light above the light
Give Your light to our hearts

O Allah ...!
if You deign
Give it to me, what do you give to Your servants that who are righteous
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This was just to tidy up. Especially the last line could be written so many ways. Someone more poetic might have further suggestions, in shaa Allah