poem: TIME

hasinah

Junior Member
assalamu alaikum, im new to this forum, thought id share my poems ive written over the last few weeks, please have a read! feedback always appreciated! jazakaAllah khair, heres one about time, i kept the flow simple and short..

Poem 5

Time

Time has got me in it,
Looks like I’ve got to get on with it,
There is no compromising with it,
It’s not like I can deny it,
I am in existence through it,
It’s not going to wait for me is it?
And there’s not a single thing I can do to stop it,
I’m so busy; I’m totally blind to it,
Its definition is controversial, but they all agree that you cannot live without it,
So I have the option to realise within it,
Or maybe I’ll sit back and watch it,
And observe another in it,
Witness the lies, happiness, laughs and tears through it,
Or I could just step back and let go of it,
Actually, I think I prefer taking advantage of it,
I swear there is something good at the end that really is worth it,
I don’t have the might or power to stop it,
But I’m in control here of what I do with it,
Although it knowingly controls me and I fail to see it,
Its length is limitless it seems, or is it?
My mind cannot understand this to deal with it,
But there is a simple reason why its there and I know it,
Somewhere in there, my names imprinted in it,
I just pray I don’t get caught up and lost inside it,
Anyway back to reality…

…what time is it?
 

kubra_2002

Allahu Akubar!!!!!
salaam

:salam2: sister, mashallah that was amezing, and nice ending. oh you asked what time is it? here in midwest it is 12:17 PM
 

Muslim-life

Always Alhamdulilah
"time" is the right word to use when it issomething which will end with Death
jazakallahu khairan... very beautifull:)
 

hasinah

Junior Member
:salam2: sister, mashallah that was amezing, and nice ending. oh you asked what time is it? here in midwest it is 12:17 PM

wa alaykum assalam..ohh its 12.17pm lol thanks for letting me know! jazakaAllah khair for all the feedback people!: ) inshaAllah will post some more up soon, hope u all enjoy reading them..next one will be about my mum lol
 

shichemlydia

Junior Member
good poem...too

salam alikoum,
this one is nice too, jazaki allaho kheirn for sharing, but poems in arabic are better i guess, the ends of the sentences are easy to harmonise.
wa salam
 

hasinah

Junior Member
wa alaykum assalam! jazakaAllah khair for ur kind replies : ) i wouldve done arabic poems, if i knew enough arabic words to rhyme them lol but my vocab is very limited as im only learning it, inshaAllah 1 day!!
 
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