Have i

nashwa

Junior Member
:salam2: brothers and sisters am letting you know that i wrote a poem i don't know if you guys going to like it or not. so please let me know if my poem is good and if i can continue to write or not. thank you so much for taking your time to read my poem. may Allah help you :tti_sister: thank you:hearts:


Have i :

have i ever did good deeds. have i ever prepare good things the day after today
have i ever wounder what life is all about.have i ever think about this life.have i ever wounder why am i in this world.have i thought about the truth of this world.what did i ever did while i was living.what did i prepare for my self,what would my answer be when i ma in the grave.what would my way for Allah be.have i ever ask my self which one did i did, my goods or my sins.do i ever know how my life is going to be when i die.when the angle of death comes to me what would say.what would i do, how is my reaction going to be.have i ever thought about that? while am parting,drinking,committing (ziina) playing gambling do everything that Allah told me not to.responding bad words to the person who tells me this is harram.disrespecting people.am i a Muslim while am lying,being not honest.what kind of a Muslim am i?what would i do when i die while am doing this sharr. will the angle of death excepts from me to wait till i do good deeds for myself? have i thought about if am going to get another chance.do i know what is going to happen to me,am i the same who is reciting the Qur'an again,again and again. crying for the seek of Allah, afraid the hell fair of Allah ,asking the paradise of Allah (S.W.T) praying everyday,remembering Allah every time, every where, every day. am i the same with that person. while this person is going to the mosque and am in the club. when this person is praying and am parting.gambling my money while this person is paying saddaqa or giving charity to the poor people. disrespecting people while this person is respect them.have i ever thought about the different between me and that person.when you think about this world is people doing good deed for the day after today and people doing bad things.have you ever thought the like this way? dear brothers and sisters fear allah and obey him. know that allah is aware of what you doing and every one else is doing.
 

Nurain

Junior Member
Dear Sister,

The message you have has come across. How about writing in shorter, more refined sentences and having them structured line per line for easier reading?

JazakAllaah khair sis for sharing!
 

IHearIslam

make dua 4 ma finals
Assalamu alaikum:)
it's good but like sister Nurain said try structuring it line per line so it's easier to read and see the ryhm...by the way, I like the massage it sends:)

Allah hafiz NOW and Always:)
 
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