My first poem: The day will pass away...

[ahmed_indian]

:salam2:

so its my first poem of my life. forgive me if it doesnt looks like a poem as i am *zero* in arts and creativity.

Here it goes:

The day will pass away
The night will pass away
Only the deeds will remain

The night in tahajjud will pass away
The day in fast will pass away
Only the deeds will remain

The date with girl will pass away
The glass of whisky will pass away
Only the deeds will remain

The day in jihad will pass away
The night in crying over Allah's fear will pass away
Only the deeds will remain

The day you scolded your parents will pass away
The night you slapped your wife will pass away
Only the deeds will remain

The day will pass away
The night will pass away
Only the deeds will remain

 

[dilek]

I liked your poem ya brother it has many messages you have points in creative not zero MasaAllah , looking forward for new poems from you inshaallah.

 

[fatima1994]

lolz ur creativity is not bad .....Nice peom :ma:

 

[HIBBA2009]

Asalamalikum

subanAllah nice poem...........u r saying right brother only deeds will remain

jazakallah khair for sharing this wonderful poem

 

[Muslim_Gurl]

Aww thats a beautiful poem MashaAllah!

 

[IHearIslam]

BismiAllah ar-rahma ar-raheem
Assalamu laikum,

mashaAllah, tabarakaAllah ! brother you did a wonderful poem for this to be your first poem! subhanaAllah! it's amaazing with a great lesson to it.
may Allah reward you for sharing, ameen
I personally like poems of this life ending (not beacuse I wanna suicide or something loo0ol wana outhubiAllah!) but because it reminds me of how lilttle the days of this world are and to only live to serve Allah ta'ala!
may Allah make this journey easy for us all!ameen
keep 'em coming brother, you are creative you just had to put that in to practice and you took the first step....now build upon it!
waslamu alaikum

 

[MutlekM]

nice poem bro salam.

 

[ahmed_indian]

I liked your poem ya brother it has many messages you have points in creative not zero MasaAllah , looking forward for new poems from you inshaallah.

barak Allah feek for not giving me zero in creativity. :tongue:

lolz ur creativity is not bad .....Nice peom :ma:

really? thank you...thank you...barak Allah feek sister.

Asalamalikum
subanAllah nice poem...........u r saying right brother only deeds will remain
jazakallah khair for sharing this wonderful poem

barak Allah feek to you as well for appreciating it.

Aww thats a beautiful poem MashaAllah!

beautiful....and my poem! may Allah bless you for ur *beautiful* words.

BismiAllah ar-rahma ar-raheem
Assalamu laikum,

mashaAllah, tabarakaAllah ! brother you did a wonderful poem for this to be your first poem! subhanaAllah! it's amaazing with a great lesson to it.
may Allah reward you for sharing, ameen
I personally like poems of this life ending (not beacuse I wanna suicide or something loo0ol wana outhubiAllah!) but because it reminds me of how lilttle the days of this world are and to only live to serve Allah ta'ala!
may Allah make this journey easy for us all!ameen
keep 'em coming brother, you are creative you just had to put that in to practice and you took the first step....now build upon it!
waslamu alaikum

Ameen to ur dua's and may Allah give you good in both the worlds!

nice poem bro salam.

barak Allah feek

 

[slaveofAllah88]

aslam o aliakum

Mashallah bhai u r talented dekha

very nice and its all truth Mashalla only deeds remain everything else fades away.