By Your Side

[loverasool]

When you be lost in this world,
When no way to run,
When u feel so strange in a world,
that you can't find your way home.
When words are gone, tears are run ,
and no smile is drawn
in your face

You will always find the way
All you have to do is pray
and the sadness you felt
will melt away

You can feel love and care
When you are drawned in tears of fear
So, never feel so sad
Cause Allah will always be there
By your side

These words are my thoughts, i know they cannot be poem yet but it's a first try, so please be honest

wa salam

 

[farhopes]

I think i'll be honest to say that it's a very good try, sister. I can feel your true feelings in each line. Go on, sister. May Allah help you.

 

[ditta]

Asalamu Alykum,

Whether it be a poem or not, its from your heart. Alhamdulilah. As the sister above said continue on.

Alhamdulilah

Wasalam

 

[-Majid-]

:salam2:

i think there is a special place for peoms kind to make some order here and makt things easy to reach in the forum

http://www.turntoislam.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?f=13

wa :salam2:

 

[-Majid-]

ah sry!

:salam2:

GO ON SIS UR REALLY GREAT I REALLY REALLY LIKE IT mashallah

WHAT MAKES A PEOM ISNT THE STYLE BUT HOW ITS IN HARMONY WITH TRUTH, A PERSONALITY, A HEARTH AND HIS BELIEFS....

WA :salam2:

 

[IslamIsLight]

very beautiful