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I hope this reaches in the best of health/imaan
I want to submit this to my school magazine, I have inspired to let others know about my Hijab because lots of people misunderstand it. I chose to express my thoughts/feelings in a poem. I have lots of time to fix some flows, or wrong words I might have in there. So, brothers and sisters I ask you to give me some feedbacks, critism, or whatever you think you can do for me. The deadline is may 8th, so I would appreciate all that you have to say and your suggestions.
Allah hafiz NOW and ALWAYS
I hope this reaches in the best of health/imaan
I want to submit this to my school magazine, I have inspired to let others know about my Hijab because lots of people misunderstand it. I chose to express my thoughts/feelings in a poem. I have lots of time to fix some flows, or wrong words I might have in there. So, brothers and sisters I ask you to give me some feedbacks, critism, or whatever you think you can do for me. The deadline is may 8th, so I would appreciate all that you have to say and your suggestions.
Here is the peom
You see me, but do you REALLY know me???
You seen in the hallways
And you might have felt sorry for me
Simply because of the way I am dressed
With your eyes, you quickly judged
Automatically thinking I am oppressed
Or maybe *culturally* proud
But nay! I am neither
I am a girl who has taken God’s command
Submitted to HIS word
Imitating none but my heroine Mary mother of Jesus the blessed
With submission, like Mary I am covered
There by seeking the mercy of my Lord
And going against the man made laws of been adorned
Eyes judging me on the size of my behind
Not paying attention to my brilliant mind
So, I said *NO* to been a boy’s toy when I chose to be HIJABED
Thus setting myself free from been objected and judged
For this beauty I have is uniquely mine and NOT to be adored by any stranger
So, next time you see me
Do not feel sorry for me
Because Hijab is my choice
So, relax because NOW you know
I am NOT oppressed and that I cover
ONLY to please my creator
You see me, but do you REALLY know me???
You seen in the hallways
And you might have felt sorry for me
Simply because of the way I am dressed
With your eyes, you quickly judged
Automatically thinking I am oppressed
Or maybe *culturally* proud
But nay! I am neither
I am a girl who has taken God’s command
Submitted to HIS word
Imitating none but my heroine Mary mother of Jesus the blessed
With submission, like Mary I am covered
There by seeking the mercy of my Lord
And going against the man made laws of been adorned
Eyes judging me on the size of my behind
Not paying attention to my brilliant mind
So, I said *NO* to been a boy’s toy when I chose to be HIJABED
Thus setting myself free from been objected and judged
For this beauty I have is uniquely mine and NOT to be adored by any stranger
So, next time you see me
Do not feel sorry for me
Because Hijab is my choice
So, relax because NOW you know
I am NOT oppressed and that I cover
ONLY to please my creator
Allah hafiz NOW and ALWAYS