These endless night

B-R-R

Purifying my soul!
Freestyle:D

Asalamu alaikum,

What, guys cheer up, a poem is a poem;)
But what amazes me the most is that none of you replied with a poem or a nasheed:)
Dj Nasheed, spin that duff beat:D

By Shaheer
These endless night
Allah protect you all from these endless nights
Where i sit in agony under the moon light
Thinking about those stars sparking so bright
Every moment reminding me of that girl I thought was right
How i used to pick flowers for her with delight

Roses are red violet are blue there is no one sweeter than u, was what i had said
But she broke my heart that was hanging by a thread
My wounds bleed while I fantasize her return
Sulking in my sorrows as my heart burns
In my last breathe, I raised by hand for dua in pain
Praying for a glance before the final drop of blood drips from my veins

These beautiful Days

Allah protects us, and showed us his mercy
is pleased with us being knowledge thursty
Shyness is a good virtue, as is great patience
Allah won't hurt you, not his obediant creation

this day is shiny, so let's us pray,
keep a smile, this's the right way,
to get there, with no fear,
Allah made our hearts clear

keep a smile, it's sunnah, smile,
forget the sorrows, for a while
take the spoon, eat some food,
don't be a fool, go to school:D

Roses are red and violets are blue
there is nothing similar to the quran, Musilms I love you:)

I got no beat to cover this nasheed of mine:D
 

Muslimah16

ServantOfAllah*
Deep and emotional....? that it is.....lol :D

Really nice one akhi, mashaAllah you're so talented, like many brothers and sisters here.
Im no good with poetry lol.... i wont even bother trying to write a poem and posting it here lol... u guys would laugh so hard lol :D and i dont want to undergo that embarrassment lol :lol:

Keep up the FAB work... MashaAllah :)
 

mhamzah

Junior Member
Allah protect you all from these endless nights
Where i sit in agony under the moon light
Thinking about those stars sparking so bright
Every moment reminding me of that girl I thought was right
How i used to pick flowers for her with delight

Roses are red violet are blue there is no one sweeter than u, was what i had said
But she broke my heart that was hanging by a thread
My wounds bleed while I fantasize her return
Sulking in my sorrows as my heart burns
In my last breathe, I raised by hand for dua in pain
Praying for a glance before the final drop of blood drips from my veins

:salam2:

Reminds me of a friend of mine.

:wasalam:
 

slaveofAllah88

Slave of Allah (swt)
:salam2:

JazakAllah khair sister , i really dont think its that good But thank you for ur kind words

These beautiful Days

Allah protects us, and showed us his mercy
is pleased with us being knowledge thursty
Shyness is a good virtue, as is great patience
Allah won't hurt you, not his obediant creation

this day is shiny, so let's us pray,
keep a smile, this's the right way,
to get there, with no fear,
Allah made our hearts clear

keep a smile, it's sunnah, smile,
forget the sorrows, for a while
take the spoon, eat some food,
don't be a fool, go to school

Roses are red and violets are blue
there is nothing similar to the quran, Musilms I love you

I got no beat to cover this nasheed of mine

:) dude this was beautiful ;) u got a beat :) the beating of our heart hehe lol thats a nice beat dub dub dub dub lol

:) good job bro May Allah (swt) reward u for ur beautiful words
 

allah is with me

Rabana Wa laqal Hamd
ha! mashallah, i am very impressed about this islam....thank you, thak you sooo much, for this poem , may allah reward you (ameen)
 

B-R-R

Purifying my soul!
Asalamu alaikum

Yes, brother Shaheer, made a very good poem. Jazakallah kheir
We recognize good talent when we see one, good job brother.
 

~Ali_

Fixing da foundation
aslam o alikum

lol im sorry :) everyone its a very happy one :p i suck at poetry lol i was just bored and i just started putting words together lol
lol man lol must be really bad at it lol cuz most of the ppl think im crazy now lol and 1 person thinks im emo lol


brother ~ALi , lol i cant be emo :p in the poem the person doesn't cut himself up :p its the wounds from the love lol that is making him bleed comone LOL try to understand the depthness of the shallow poem lol

:) thx dude u guyz can tell i was really bored

hahahaha i just read it twice -.- didnt really look into it - like i said brother, poems is not my thing. But hey your one is good :)
Looking forward to your future "expansions"

Walaikumasalam
 

slaveofAllah88

Slave of Allah (swt)
hahahaha i just read it twice -.- didnt really look into it - like i said brother, poems is not my thing. But hey your one is good :)
Looking forward to your future "expansions"

Walaikumasalam

:salam2:
lol :) no worries brother i dont really think it was good but thx for the compliment Hmm lol if im ever really really bored like taht (which i hope im not ) i will write another one Inshallah
 

IHearIslam

make dua 4 ma finals
Assalamu Alaikum:)

whew! AlhamduliAllah, it aint about you! but after all it's SWEEET poem, I like it, I guess a person who heart broken would cry over it...aww
beautiful walahi,
Thanks for sharing:)
Allah hafiz NOW and ALWAYS:)
 

IHearIslam

make dua 4 ma finals
Asalamu alaikum,

What, guys cheer up, a poem is a poem;)
But what amazes me the most is that none of you replied with a poem or a nasheed:)
Dj Nasheed, spin that duff beat:D



These beautiful Days

Allah protects us, and showed us his mercy
is pleased with us being knowledge thursty
Shyness is a good virtue, as is great patience
Allah won't hurt you, not his obediant creation

this day is shiny, so let's us pray,
keep a smile, this's the right way,
to get there, with no fear,
Allah made our hearts clear

keep a smile, it's sunnah, smile,
forget the sorrows, for a while
take the spoon, eat some food,
don't be a fool, go to school:D

Roses are red and violets are blue
there is nothing similar to the quran, Musilms I love you:)

I got no beat to cover this nasheed of mine:D

:salam2:
wow! this one is good tooo! mashaAllah

Allah hafiz NOW and aLWAYS:)
 

slaveofAllah88

Slave of Allah (swt)
Assalamu Alaikum:)

whew! AlhamduliAllah, it aint about you! but after all it's SWEEET poem, I like it, I guess a person who heart broken would cry over it...aww
beautiful walahi,
Thanks for sharing:)
Allah hafiz NOW and ALWAYS:)

:salam2:
thx sister :) JazakAllah khair sister

:) and Allah Hafiz :) to u as well
 

IHearIslam

make dua 4 ma finals
Asalamu alaikum,

What, guys cheer up, a poem is a poem;)
But what amazes me the most is that none of you replied with a poem or a nasheed:)
Dj Nasheed, spin that duff beat:D



These beautiful Days

Allah protects us, and showed us his mercy
is pleased with us being knowledge thursty
Shyness is a good virtue, as is great patience
Allah won't hurt you, not his obediant creation

this day is shiny, so let's us pray,
keep a smile, this's the right way,
to get there, with no fear,
Allah made our hearts clear

keep a smile, it's sunnah, smile,
forget the sorrows, for a while
take the spoon, eat some food,
don't be a fool, go to school:D

Roses are red and violets are blue
there is nothing similar to the quran, Musilms I love you:)

I got no beat to cover this nasheed of mine:D

But what amazes me the most is that none of you replied with a poem or a nasheed
ok here is what I came up with:)
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ENDLESS nights, my version​
:salam2:
This endless nights
As I sit looking at the stars
Admiring the glitter shines
Whispering SubhanaAllah as I see the beauty that Brights
Reflecting on my day
Thinking if will ever see that night again
If I will ever see the beauty again
If I can ever say *wow, beautiful* again
SubhanaAllah, life is just a test
But do we ever reflect
On the creation so perfect
May Allah guide us all
Protect us all and forgive
For without His mercy we are lost
Forever forgotten
lol, this is what I could come up with, hope it's NOT off topic!
Allah hafiz NOW and ALWAYS:)
 

slaveofAllah88

Slave of Allah (swt)
ok here is what I came up with:)
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ENDLESS nights, my version​
:salam2:
This endless nights
As I sit looking at the stars
Admiring the glitter shines
Whispering SubhanaAllah as I see the beauty that Brights
Reflecting on my day
Thinking if will ever see that night again
If I will ever see the beauty again
If I can ever say *wow, beautiful* again
SubhanaAllah, life is just a test
But do we ever reflect
On the creation so perfect
May Allah guide us all
Protect us all and forgive
For without His mercy we are lost
Forever forgotten
lol, this is what I could come up with, hope it's NOT off topic!
Allah hafiz NOW and ALWAYS:)

:salam2:
sister :) this is so awesom :) beautiful
i think i shud remove mine :) and put urs up SubhanAllah :) wonderful
 

Almeftah

Junior Member
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

(Al-Shuara 26) Shall I inform you (O people!) upon whom the Shayâtin (devils) descend? (221) They descend on every lying, sinful person. (222) Who gives ear (to the devils and they pour what they may have heard of the unseen from the angels), and most of them are liars. (223) As for the poets, the erring ones follow them, (224) See you not that they speak about every subject (praising people - right or wrong) in their poetry? (225) And that they say what they do not do. (226) Except those who believe (in the Oneness of Allâh — Islâmic Monotheism), and do righteous deeds, and remember Allâh much and vindicate themselves after they have been wronged [by replying back in the poetry to the unjust poetry (which the pagan poets utter against the Muslims)]. And those who do wrong will come to know by what overturning they will be overturned. (227)

So chose your words wisely, And try writing about great issues that concern the Muslim nation.
 
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