These endless night

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    B-R-R Purifying my soul!

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    Freestyle:D

    Asalamu alaikum,

    What, guys cheer up, a poem is a poem;)
    But what amazes me the most is that none of you replied with a poem or a nasheed:)
    Dj Nasheed, spin that duff beat:D

    These beautiful Days

    Allah protects us, and showed us his mercy
    is pleased with us being knowledge thursty
    Shyness is a good virtue, as is great patience
    Allah won't hurt you, not his obediant creation

    this day is shiny, so let's us pray,
    keep a smile, this's the right way,
    to get there, with no fear,
    Allah made our hearts clear

    keep a smile, it's sunnah, smile,
    forget the sorrows, for a while
    take the spoon, eat some food,
    don't be a fool, go to school:D

    Roses are red and violets are blue
    there is nothing similar to the quran, Musilms I love you:)

    I got no beat to cover this nasheed of mine:D
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    Muslimah16 ServantOfAllah*

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    Deep and emotional....? that it is.....lol :D

    Really nice one akhi, mashaAllah you're so talented, like many brothers and sisters here.
    Im no good with poetry lol.... i wont even bother trying to write a poem and posting it here lol... u guys would laugh so hard lol :D and i dont want to undergo that embarrassment lol :lol:

    Keep up the FAB work... MashaAllah :)
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    :salam2:

    Reminds me of a friend of mine.

    :wasalam:
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    slaveofAllah88 Slave of Allah (swt)

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    JazakAllah khair sister , i really dont think its that good But thank you for ur kind words

    :) dude this was beautiful ;) u got a beat :) the beating of our heart hehe lol thats a nice beat dub dub dub dub lol

    :) good job bro May Allah (swt) reward u for ur beautiful words
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    allah is with me Rabana Wa laqal Hamd

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    ha! mashallah, i am very impressed about this islam....thank you, thak you sooo much, for this poem , may allah reward you (ameen)
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    Asalam o Alykum

    achii thee itni bori bhi nahin thee ,
    chalo best of luck for future ,lol
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    slaveofAllah88 Slave of Allah (swt)

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    which poem sister lol :) mine or my brother :)
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    B-R-R Purifying my soul!

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    Asalamu alaikum

    Yes, brother Shaheer, made a very good poem. Jazakallah kheir
    We recognize good talent when we see one, good job brother.
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    lol yea right brother :) ur the one with the skills that kills hehe
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    hahahaha i just read it twice -.- didnt really look into it - like i said brother, poems is not my thing. But hey your one is good :)
    Looking forward to your future "expansions"

    Walaikumasalam
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    lol :) no worries brother i dont really think it was good but thx for the compliment Hmm lol if im ever really really bored like taht (which i hope im not ) i will write another one Inshallah
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    Assalamu Alaikum:)

    whew! AlhamduliAllah, it aint about you! but after all it's SWEEET poem, I like it, I guess a person who heart broken would cry over it...aww
    beautiful walahi,
    Thanks for sharing:)
    Allah hafiz NOW and ALWAYS:)
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    IHearIslam make dua 4 ma finals

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    wow! this one is good tooo! mashaAllah

    Allah hafiz NOW and aLWAYS:)
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    thx sister :) JazakAllah khair sister

    :) and Allah Hafiz :) to u as well
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    ok here is what I came up with:)
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    ENDLESS nights, my version​
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    This endless nights
    As I sit looking at the stars
    Admiring the glitter shines
    Whispering SubhanaAllah as I see the beauty that Brights
    Reflecting on my day
    Thinking if will ever see that night again
    If I will ever see the beauty again
    If I can ever say *wow, beautiful* again
    SubhanaAllah, life is just a test
    But do we ever reflect
    On the creation so perfect
    May Allah guide us all
    Protect us all and forgive
    For without His mercy we are lost
    Forever forgotten
    lol, this is what I could come up with, hope it's NOT off topic!
    Allah hafiz NOW and ALWAYS:)
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    sister :) this is so awesom :) beautiful
    i think i shud remove mine :) and put urs up SubhanAllah :) wonderful
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    man :) u guyz can write amaing poetry props to B-R-R and Allah's servant
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    Seems to be so sad poem. great creation.
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    السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

    (Al-Shuara 26) Shall I inform you (O people!) upon whom the Shayâtin (devils) descend? (221) They descend on every lying, sinful person. (222) Who gives ear (to the devils and they pour what they may have heard of the unseen from the angels), and most of them are liars. (223) As for the poets, the erring ones follow them, (224) See you not that they speak about every subject (praising people - right or wrong) in their poetry? (225) And that they say what they do not do. (226) Except those who believe (in the Oneness of Allâh — Islâmic Monotheism), and do righteous deeds, and remember Allâh much and vindicate themselves after they have been wronged [by replying back in the poetry to the unjust poetry (which the pagan poets utter against the Muslims)]. And those who do wrong will come to know by what overturning they will be overturned. (227)

    So chose your words wisely, And try writing about great issues that concern the Muslim nation.
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    JazakAllah khair everyone for liking it :)

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